Post by Prime Hunter on Jun 26, 2005 22:44:35 GMT -5
Well, I'm not done w/ the story yet but here's a preview of it
name: Star Wars: Garrik Skywalker
type: fan fic
rating PG for mild violece and some language
CHAPTER 1: Return of the Sith
It was a dark night, I swiped the sweat of my forehead.. It was hot in here, really hot. I was In the rooftop of the Baticor building staring at a Dark Alley, nothing happened... But I had to wait, that's what my master said. My master was wise and patient.
Suddenly i saw him, a tall figure covered in white robe, running through the alley, I jumped, without thinking twice, i landed right in front of him and was about to punch him.. when suddenly electricity went off his arms, the electricity pushed me back, i was in great pain.. He was walking towards me. I thought this was my end, when my master jumped between use. My master (O'gonn Hariss) took out and ignited his green lightsaber. The man who attacked me tried to escape, but my master wounded his arm..
HE looked back and I could feel a burst of anger in his mind. He took out 2 lightsabers and ignited them, they were bothe yellow, then he attacked my master, i saw as they both engaged on a lightsaber duel. They were both equally good.. I felt better and the pain from the electricity was gone. I was ready to fight.
Suddenly my master said something to me: "GO TO THE ACADEMY, WARN THE COUNSIL..... TELL THEM THE SITH HAVE RETURNED". I couldn't believe it. SIth? They had vanished for 2,000 years. I didn't know what to do. Abandon my master, or help him... I disobeyed my master's orders, I took out my blue lightsaber and went to help my master. The SIth looked at me with anger, suddenly, his lightsaber went through my master's left arm, my master fell to the floor in pain....
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name: Star Wars: Garrik Skywalker
type: fan fic
rating PG for mild violece and some language
CHAPTER 1: Return of the Sith
It was a dark night, I swiped the sweat of my forehead.. It was hot in here, really hot. I was In the rooftop of the Baticor building staring at a Dark Alley, nothing happened... But I had to wait, that's what my master said. My master was wise and patient.
Suddenly i saw him, a tall figure covered in white robe, running through the alley, I jumped, without thinking twice, i landed right in front of him and was about to punch him.. when suddenly electricity went off his arms, the electricity pushed me back, i was in great pain.. He was walking towards me. I thought this was my end, when my master jumped between use. My master (O'gonn Hariss) took out and ignited his green lightsaber. The man who attacked me tried to escape, but my master wounded his arm..
HE looked back and I could feel a burst of anger in his mind. He took out 2 lightsabers and ignited them, they were bothe yellow, then he attacked my master, i saw as they both engaged on a lightsaber duel. They were both equally good.. I felt better and the pain from the electricity was gone. I was ready to fight.
Suddenly my master said something to me: "GO TO THE ACADEMY, WARN THE COUNSIL..... TELL THEM THE SITH HAVE RETURNED". I couldn't believe it. SIth? They had vanished for 2,000 years. I didn't know what to do. Abandon my master, or help him... I disobeyed my master's orders, I took out my blue lightsaber and went to help my master. The SIth looked at me with anger, suddenly, his lightsaber went through my master's left arm, my master fell to the floor in pain....
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